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Let's see how much I've improved... by doris4u Let's see how much I've improved... by doris4u
The before doll is my part to the collab: A touch of Black and Red
The after doll is my part to the new collab: A touch of Black and Red 2nd Power

I've wanted to see how much I have improved and hell yeah I did. I mean look at the old one's hair it's yuck in comparison with the new one's hair and before I was drawing the same clothes 'cause I didn't know how to make other clothes and I was afraid to try 'cause I trough I might fail OTL
On the old doll it was the first time I've pixeled a face and I remember I've wanted to do a different expression but I've kept on failing; on the after doll I trough I should change the expression but I've changed my mind c: and I wanted to keep the old expression 'cause it's cute :3

PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK~ ;)

The left one was made in MSPaint and the right one in GIMP.

Base by ~ScorpionPixels
Rose is mine
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FoxieArtist Aug 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:c Before was better
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doris4u Aug 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Not at all.
On the old one her face is fine but that nose is too big for my OC and I do not know what is up with her eyeshadow, it does not work like that there is no shading on the face, just a little where the hair touches the face.
And her hair, oh dear God, her hair lets forget about the failed shading and highlighting since back then I had no idea what I was doing but that hair shape, hair does not work like that, it should not be fixed to the skull because it has no volume and real hair, no matter how straight it is, has at least a little volume.
There are probably more mistakes which I do not notice but at least her clothes are good.
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LacrimosaMaiden Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Cooll! I love the colors. <3
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doris4u Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
{ Thank you^^ }
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Dying-Creativity Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You've improved a lot! Keep it up!
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doris4u Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
{ Thanks^^ I will c: }
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MapleSyrupMonster Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow! Nice improvement! You are really good at making bases ;):)
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doris4u Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
{ Thanks~! I've made the doll not the base; the link to the base and the person who made it are at the end of the description :) }
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MapleSyrupMonster Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh, well cool :)
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DelpheneLightfoot Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I like it!!!! I'm in the middle of a base re-do, only I'm using just MS paint b/c Gimp kills me.
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