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OMG! I was proud of that... by doris4u OMG! I was proud of that... by doris4u
...just look how ugly 'the before' one is, it has no nose and such a big forehead.

Please tell me what you think about the new one especially about it's shading^^ - Critique is very welcomed :)

The 'before' one is my part to this collab: iHuman...
The 'after' one is my part to this collab: Music is my life!

Thank you for all the comments, I read all of them even if I don't respond to some (I just get lazy, sorry) so don't be afraid to leave a comment.

Base by ~khl1
Wing by ~base-o-holic
OC, Rose is mine
The album image was made by me and it is somewhere in my gallery.
The 'before' one was made on MSPaint and edited in Paint.NET
The 'after' one was made in GIMP only
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hiei14 Featured By Owner Edited Jun 24, 2014  Student General Artist
You might try using colors that are not so saturated or fining pallets for pixel art that would definitely be a a huge help. 
you'll get an instant "lvl up" in your work if you try that. : D 
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doris4u Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for the advice ^^
Even now I'm still struggling with color palettes and constantly changing them, especially those of characters I haven't done in a while.
Looking at some characters palettes some were too dull, others too close apart and shading could be barely noticed.
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SavageFrog Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
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doris4u Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much~!
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SavageFrog Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Your welcome
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sweetsweetsunshines Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
nice improvement ^^
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PixelMeBlu Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013
Oo, I like the improvement of the eyes! Only thing I can think is that there's a bit of pillow-shading (her boots, skirt, and the ipod, specifically). But I can definitely see the improvement. :D Nice work!
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doris4u Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you^^ Yeah, I'm still studying and practicing shadowing. Thanks.
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YuYuAmie Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
really good! lots of improvement ^^
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IDotheClickyClick Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Student Photographer
The newer one looks good, but I think I like the iPod screen better on the older one.
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Lyklex Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013
You definitely have improved, but you still have room for improvement,

her eye on the right seems too small compared to the one on the left, especially how you have the left one more centered with the right looking very cross-eyed.

The shading has improved, but the skirt is so flat looking, but bravo on the skin and hair!

The fonts you use are difficult to read, the one on the left actually easier. Same thing with your mark, go for legible instead of bold and thick.
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doris4u Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, I know, that is why I have asked for others opinions and critiques. Thank you for taking your time to write this comment c: Everything you said it is true. I used to have huge problems with skin shading and making hair but practice makes perfect. Thank you again ^^
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Lyklex Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013
No problem and I hope I helped. <3 Keep your chin up, it just takes practice.
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doris4u Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, it helped me understand where I did wrong and I'll try to correct it in the future.
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AnnieHorror Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Before is cuter and more stylized but you did improve on shading and andits more realistic.
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Lululuminesce Featured By Owner May 26, 2013
Good progress, definitely did a better job with the shading and eyes on the second try.
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doris4u Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you^^
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Lululuminesce Featured By Owner May 26, 2013
No problem!
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JaysonWalls Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
to be honest I kinda like the one on the left a little better.
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