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OMG! I was proud of that... by doris4u OMG! I was proud of that... by doris4u
...just look how ugly 'the before' one is, it has no nose and such a big forehead.

Please tell me what you think about the new one especially about it's shading^^ - Critique is very welcomed :)

The 'before' one is my part to this collab: iHuman...
The 'after' one is my part to this collab: Music is my life!

Thank you for all the comments, I read all of them even if I don't respond to some (I just get lazy, sorry) so don't be afraid to leave a comment.

Base by ~khl1
Wing by ~base-o-holic
OC, Rose is mine
The album image was made by me and it is somewhere in my gallery.
The 'before' one was made on MSPaint and edited in Paint.NET
The 'after' one was made in GIMP only
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SavageFrog Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
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doris4u Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much~!
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SavageFrog Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Your welcome
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sweetsweetsunshines Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
nice improvement ^^
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:iconpixelmeblu:
Oo, I like the improvement of the eyes! Only thing I can think is that there's a bit of pillow-shading (her boots, skirt, and the ipod, specifically). But I can definitely see the improvement. :D Nice work!
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doris4u Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you^^ Yeah, I'm still studying and practicing shadowing. Thanks.
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YuYuAmie Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
really good! lots of improvement ^^
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xxtoshiuchihaxx Jun 13, 2013  Student Photographer
The newer one looks good, but I think I like the iPod screen better on the older one.
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:iconlyklex:
You definitely have improved, but you still have room for improvement,

her eye on the right seems too small compared to the one on the left, especially how you have the left one more centered with the right looking very cross-eyed.

The shading has improved, but the skirt is so flat looking, but bravo on the skin and hair!

The fonts you use are difficult to read, the one on the left actually easier. Same thing with your mark, go for legible instead of bold and thick.
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doris4u Jun 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, I know, that is why I have asked for others opinions and critiques. Thank you for taking your time to write this comment c: Everything you said it is true. I used to have huge problems with skin shading and making hair but practice makes perfect. Thank you again ^^
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